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Editorial Services

-Kathryn Fitzmaurice, author of The Years the Swallows Came Early and
Diamond in the Deser

"Lori has a way of getting to the heart of the story, the exact thing that might be missing or that a story needs, and telling you what that is.  She is able to see the big picture.  She is supportive and professional and driven. I am certain my own first MG novel would not have made it without her help and loving suggestions to make it better." 

Revision can make your work come alive! Lori can help you:

Develop/streamline plot

Improve character development/arc

Use concise and active writing

Increase sensory description

Focus the narrative voice

Improve dialogue/structure/grammar

Clarify thesis and supporting details

Other writing options: ghost writing, web content development, promotional content development

With a degree in journalism and creative writing, Lori has been digging into the revision process for what seems like eons! With over 75 books and stories published, her editorial time spent working with editors has given her a keen eye for revising manuscripts. On a freelance basis, Lori edits picture books, chapter books, middle grade & young adult novels, as well as short stories and non-fiction works for all ages.
Rates: $50 per hour for content or line editing.
Contact Lori first for an estimate of the number of hours required.

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